Trinity's Ghost is kind of a spoiler name, maybe just Trinity?
Trinity would be good.
Try "Trinity's Anguish"
What about trintiy's heroes
Trinity's Heroes? Hmm...that's not bad
Seems like too much of a spoiler, as I'm assuming this means TrinIty will die.'Maybe Dylan's Revenge?
Don't assume. It could just mean something that's haunting his character...
Personaly I like trinitys heroes too it just seems fitting bc trinitys ghosts makes it seem like she's dead
I think a good title would be "searching for trinity"
i think the Search for trinity would be a good one, but thats just me
I would suggest something that doesn't involve names in it, because that's kind of spoilerish. Maybe something like...The Ghost? Something simple yet relating to the story. Nothing obvious.
I think the name should be Government's Mistakes, I agree with the other people, a name shouldn't be in the title.
"Revenge of the noobs", only thing I could think of...sorry...
The n00b traiters
how aboutNo Longer nOObs
"The Holy Ghost" maybe as the title or maybe just as a way to describe Trinity in legend (in case she's out there creating a legend for herself)...since you got the whole Trinity-Christianity thing goin
i think it should just be "rebellion"
"Trinity's ghost" works great except that it implies that she's dead. Maybe that's a good thing, because Dylan thinks shes still alive but everyone else thinks he's kidding himself at the end of book 1. Still, if that's not what you want to imply, then use a different choice of words for "ghost"
I just read this book on my kindle got so atached to it and plz hurry up on it i would just name it noob wariers book two to keep it easyer to find and buy
All i know is it needs to hurry up and get published 0.0 Im excited for it, How about Search for Trinity?
no longer noobs seems actually good and the cover just a green army helmet
I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT BOOK. i read the first one on my kindle and it was amazing and i cant wait until the next one
How about "The n00bs of rebellion" (book two of the n00b warriors) and no pressure or anything but could tou plz hurry up Im dying of patience for book 2!!!!
noob warriors book two
Scott Douglas you have the most brilliant ideas! Keep up the good work!!!!
You could try "Trinity's shadow" it wouldnt tell if she was dead or alive. It may be a good way to express the book.
Those reviewers were very criticising. I didnt see ANY flaws with the book. Keep up the great work!!!!!
maybe these..... "Rebellious n00bs" "The vengeance" "The n00bs revenge" "Trinity's torturer's" They aren't great but they're something!!!
how about the n00bs uprising
I wonder if Scott Douglas accually reads our posts.... Hmmm...... anymore suggestions for titles? b-cuz I'm almost out. Well, how about "revenges fury" "A reason to fight" "Dylan's fury" "a casting shadow" ok thats all I got for now....
im pretty sure he does...
Hey Scott, I was wondering what titles you like and dislike. Its kinda nagging on me to know.
@Truett, I haven't given it too much thought...it probably will be the last thing I do before the book comes out.
You could call it The n00b Warriors: De1337ionIt would refer to the deletion of the government without being too much of a spoiler, and would keep with the nerdy/gaming title theme.
And btw, loved the book. I'm not sure why the people you sent it to considered it too violent. Sure it was violent in some parts, but they were fairly brief. Perhaps you should send it to the people who publish Stephen King and Tom Clancy books, they're pretty in to violence =)
I think it should be called 7r1n17y like trinity
I like the name n0 l0ng3r n00bs.
"The Rebellious Quest" "The coco base"
Lol every message I've sent I've sent it from my kindle. (including this one)
Hey Scott? I was wondering if your atleast half way through writing the book.
The first chapter is about half done...I started working on it last week. I've been pretty swamped with other projects, but am spending my summer working on it...
How about "Guerillas in the Midst"
Okay, I know what you mean. Well good luck with the book¡!¡!¡!¡!
could u post a few paragraphs on your blog so we can get a gist on how the second one will start
I wouldnt because it might give away a few pointers and make people MORE desperate for him to finish the book. I think we should stop nagging on him.
Whatever you decide to call it, the title should include the word N00b. This word comes to identify not only your book, but the universe within it. If I were you I'd even go so far as to use the same format as the first title - something like "The N00b Revolution" "The N00b's Ghost" etc.
Hey i in joyed the first book, but the title of the next book seems "off" Trinity's Ghost. It doesn't seem to match, but who am i to judge.
n00b Warriors: Hero Rebellion
Trinity's shadow that sounds good as well as me I agree with the 51's post Trinity's Ghost sounds off Its not a big deal I'm just giving my opinion
Suggestions:Trinity's ShadowThe Shadow of TrinityIs she really dead???
I really like that title and dont think it really spoils anyhting? its sorta like hes chaseing Trinity's ghost dosent really say weather or not shes alive. but then agian thats just me. Really liked the first book and cant wait for number to!By:Brady Wilebski(no acount but not trying to hide my name or anything)
"Trinity's hero's" would be good to though i think?-Brady
How about dylan's search
i think it should be shadows of trinity
I would like the name "who's the n00b now?", but then again I'm not a writer so...But seriously, Scott Douglas your book rocks and I want the second one so badddddd :D fast!
Get your own Idea's I came up with the "Trinity's Shadow" and "The Shadow of Trinity"
He's inspired me to start writing!!!!!!
when is book 2 comeing!!!!!!!!!
hey scott.i think trinitys shadow is great because its like dylan is searching for trinity but shes just out of reach.but anyway...i dont mind...just make it easy to find on the kindle.mabye...trinitys shadow(n00b warriors book 2)keep up the good work.
Plz tell when n00b warriors 2 is comming out.I CAN'T WAIT!?!lol
I can't wait for book 2. How about, NoobAgeddon!
mabye searching for trinity?
Id try something like "We are all Alive", "Noob Warriors: Trinity", or maybe even "Trinity's Alive". ether way using some form of Trinity in the title would maybe be a good thing or bad thing. But ether way i know i will be reading this book when it comes out, its one of my favorite books of all time. =)
i think trinitys shadow would be the best title it doesnt give much away and you know its going to be centered around the inner love story not the war.I dont know thats my oppinion but im sure whatever you choose will be good.Cant wait for it to come out.
When is comeing out?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have an idea!How about a cross war between the 'frosties', the 'cocos' and the chimera from the resistance titles but remade to suite the story and have trinty come back. maybe she was wounded, nonmortaly but badly.how about that?p.s no leapers!p.s.s look them up!
N00b rebellion now thats a good one
You have to think is this the last book or are there going to be more
hi im a great fan of the n00b warriors and i really want to know when the next book is coming out. oh yeah and i think "Trinity" itself is a pretty good title already.
"Hopefully" next year.
How about "She Lives On" or "n00b Rebellion: We Fight On"I don't know but great job on the first book!
Does Scott Douglas read the comments?I've already posted titles above, hope you like!
Yes and yes.
I do hope that you all know that Trinity's Shadow was my Idea
how about noobs on a quest
"rebels on a mission"
Noob warriors: A changing war
Noob rebellion: a changing war
War of the n00bs:Score 1n00bs rebeln00b warriors:Fight for all you known00b warriors:We live for herOur war cry, Trinityn00b Warriors: We believen00b Warriors:We have hopen00b Warriors:The third siden00b Warriors:The Unknown Soldiersn00b Warriors:The Hidden TruthSorry for the multiple replies Scott! Hope you like and others: n00b rebellion is mine ans so are the other comments by Eve above. These are too!
I just finished reading the first. maybe something that doesn't explain stuff with trinity so it is a surprise for all. Just so it gives suspense without giving it away. you might still want to add her name in the title though if it is mostly about her or involves a lot of her.
I honestly don't have any ideas for a title though.
They should make a movie of this book.
I like n00b Warriors: The Third sideThe most out of what I have seen. Just something to think on.
howz about n00b Warriors 2, Dylan's Revenge?i like that and ima huge fan of u...
Its hard to say as we are just going of title
n00b warriors: A Fight to Remembern00b warriors: For Trinity!n00b warriors: Retaliationn00b warriors: Without Youn00b warriors: War Trianglen00b warriors: We Shall Win this Warn00b warriors: Dylan's Hopen00b warriors: A Hope for Him, A Hope for Hern00b warriors: The Invisible Threatn00b warriors: Our War Cry, TrinityPlease don't accuse me of ripping off an above comment, that was me! And Scott- Sorry for all the posts but I was in the middle of writing my book and... they came to me! P.S Thanks to anonymous who liked one of my titles!
Can we please get a date on the book release..... please answer this one
I'd like to say this year, but we'll see. I have a mortgage to pay, and writing free books doesn't pay the bills :-)
I totally understand. You are doing it for the benefit of others, I think that is just awesome that you would do that! I thank you for sharing your book with us! ~ Truett
Search for TruthGhost Warriors
I like the name "Trinity's ghost," it doesn't say that she is dead but it also doesn't suggest that she is alive either. I think it is the perfect name! I like some of the other titles too but this one just sounded to me like a book I would LOVE to read. By the way Scott, I think you are a GREAT writer! I don't say that to many authors only ones who I think deserve it, and you certainly do! I hope you you enjoy writing the book as much as I enjoy reading them! (Alot!)-Emily G.
"Battle Cry", "H0PE", "Cry within the Crossfire", "Personal play", "Trinity's Avenger" "Personal Clash", and "Looming Death". Hey Scott, I was wondering which ones have you most considered? The suggestions I have had (The one I think is actually good) Is "Trinity's Shadow" I was the first to come up with it. So, thanks for reading!
I have read the book three times and out of all of these title suggestions I think most fitting is "Trinity's Shadow" And "Trinity's Heroes" Scott, I think you should most consider those. (But that is merely my opinion) Here is the reason why I like "Trinity's Shadow" is because it is not a dead give away or just a spark of hope. The reason I like "Trinity's Heroes" Is because well, its self-explanatory. Here is one of my own titles "Spark of hope". Thanks for reading! Lease reply with your opinion Scott!
Anonymous (awesome name, BTW), right now, the title is still Trinity's Ghost on paper, but I haven't ruled out any of these.
Thank you for the input! You have really encouraged me into writing. Thanks for the book that I literally could not put down! :D
LOVED the book, realy did, try Fame's revenge or someting like that.
Scott, Sir, I was wondering what point are you at in writing the book. I know you are in between many progects but all I want is an update to where you are. Thanks!
Not as far as I'd like to be; I'm still hoping to finish it this year though.
Thanks! Obviously you are doing it for other peoples enjoyment in reading and yours in writing and I thank you for even taking the book little by little to finish.
What about N00bs 4ever
"Creating a fuss" "Gritting Teeth" "Adrenaline rush" "N00bs going Pr0" "Former n00bs" "Bubbling Bl00d" "Bl00d spill" "Personal Volley" "Knight in shining Armor" BTW guys I suggest not saying titles with stuff like Tr1n1t7 it isn't that attractive for a buyer. It has to be dramatic but still make sense. It should be like mine. (I am not saying that it should be mine on the cover. But its an example) the 00's I added were for the affect of the previous book. If you haven't noticed mine don't have a bunch of random numbers. The random numbers defeat the purpose of n00b warriors. Its gaming speak. Get with it. :P Hope you guys like my suggestions!
trinitys shadow is the best
Thanks, I would be happy if he chose that. But I have come to know, he is probably having some really good title views himself I am wondering what he has come up with.
Trinitys shadow is a good name ! Ps truett your names are the best
Ps save some names for us
Am I the only one here who thinks that Trinity is like Aeris Gainsborough?
Hey Scott, is the next book going to be free? Because the first one was free for a short amount of time; now its $1.99. If it is going to be free how long will it be free? Thanks! ~ Truett
Good question. I don't know. I said all along that it would be, but things have changed in ePublishing. Everyone is coming out with different policies. Apple will let me sell it free, but Amazon could technically could remove it for charging when it's free elsewhere--BUT I can't match the free price on Amazon without putting it in the "select" program. Putting it in the select program will mean I can't sell it anywhere BUT Amazon! So it's all a giant catch-22 right now. Amazon has gotten real good at using robots to comb the Internet making sure the price of a book is not lower somewhere else.I was going to post it on Apple for free for a few days before releasing it elsewhere, but they don't publish books immediately like they used to...it's been taking up to two months for a book to be approved.Strangely, it's still free in the UK?Don't worry...if it's not free, and you really can't afford .99 or 1.99 or whatever it is (and there's no shame in that--I know a lot of you don't have credit cards or parent permission to use there's), then I'll find a way to get it to you. Apple gives me a very limited amount of promo vouchers that people can use to download it free.The book is still months from being complete, so rules and policies can change from now til then. So we'll see...
Thanks for the info! There is just one thing. My kindle is on my moms account, and well she doesn't like me reading stuff like that, so I really don't want to cause a huge fuss. :/ Anyways thanks! Keep up the great work! :D ~ Truett
So I'm on your mom's "don't read" list? That makes me feel sort of smutty!
No offense inteded! I promise! C'mon she won't even let me read the The Hunger Games! :/ She doesn't even know about The N00b warriors. You are an excellent writer, indeed. She just doesn't like books about killing. (I feel too sheltered!) I just would like another way for it to get to me, if that is not too much trouble for you! Thanks! ~ Truett
That can be arranged :-)The N00b Warriors isn't about killing though (neither is the Hunger Games)...if anything, it's about not wanting to kill--being forced into uncontrollable situations and making choices no kids should have to make.
Well, she doesn't like books about killing overall. I totally understand the difference. Anyways, I am glad you got this incredible idea for a book. I got my cousin to buy it and read it! :D He LOVED it! Thanks for being so arrangable for me! ~ Truett
Sorry to here that...too bad she'll never let you read the Bible--lots of killing in that :-)
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Let me rephrase that. "Well, she doesn't like books that INVOLVE killing." Thanks anyways! :)
-_-' I read the bible all the time. But that is for devotional not recreational reading. >:P Ha ha I would totally read the Hunger Games if I could!
Hey Scott I finished reading the boob warriors book one and I was wondering when book two was comming out. Thanks and the first book is awesome.
The boob warriors? Is that some X rated parody of the book :)
Hahaha I ment "The Noob Warriors"
it's just a typo
It could be called Dylan's journey or Dylan's redemption
I love the book! I think that "N00bs of revolution" mentioned earlier iis a brilliant name!
Honestly it's very hard to come up with a fitting title for a book when the content is unknown. I'm pretty sure there are a select few people who know, and I doubt they will tell. A good title encompasses everything about the book, while adding to it and catching the eye of a casual observer (I was a casual observer scrolling through the free section on amazon). n00b warriors is a good title for the first one as the book is about (plotline wise) a couple of kids (n00bs) who get sent off to a war, and it goes through the lives of these "n00bs" as they fight for survival. For the second book though we have an idea, but that idea is only that Dylan will search for Trinity while trying to bring an end to the war. It could just as easily be called "n00b diplomats" as he is striving for the end of war. So essentially I'm saying a truly good title cannot be dredged up when the storyline is not known.
I think it should be called "The Search for Trinity". ps: I think Noob Warriors would make an absolutely great movie! :)
I think you should find someone to make the movie, anonymous :)
n00b warriors: This War is Oursn00b warriors: Stay with usn00b warriors: The Rebellion Revealedn00b warriors: To Find Hern00b warriors: Not Hern00b warriors: Our Time to Fightn00b warriors: Destiny Awaitsn00b warriors: Taking Chancesn00b warriors: The Risk is Oursn00b warriors: The Blame on Men00b warriors: Guilt is a Burdenn00b warriors: Into the Lion's DenYay, I came up with more! It takes me so long to come up with anything good!Thanks for writing an amazing book Scott :D
What chapter are you on, Scott? Like chapter 3? Just wanted to know the progress on the book.
The draft is done, Truett...so really all the chapters are done; but it's just a draft about 10,000 words in length.
Alrighty, thanks for the update! :)
Oooh, I can't wait! Looks like something might possibly be out for the end of the year, and something good too!
I think 'Trinity's Ghost' is a very interesting title, but its clear that some don't think putting her name into it isn't a good idea. I agree, so, 'The Spirit of Our Warriors'
I just wanna continue with the story, call it the level up from a noob, pro? Pro warriors? Who cares lets just get the new book
THE NEXT LEVEL :D #ImAGenious (or something pertaining to the previously mentioned title)
I think it should be centered more around the war, if not Trinity.
Like a pro! Or center it around the coco's more
I like the sound of 'The Spirit of Our Warrior/s'
Lil the status for this page is to finish book 2 as your new years resolution but its already summer break for most schools and its draft was just finished about a month ago. Not to seem too impacient but when EXACTLY is the second book coming out. I really liked the first one and I am very excited for the next one to come out.
Lol the status for this page says that Scott's new years resolutions is to finish book two but summer break for most schools has already started and the rough draft for this book has only come out about a month ago. Not to seem impacient at all but when EXACTLY is the book coming out. I'm not really knowledgeable in the writing buisness but this page was started LAST YEAR and the book (I estimate) is not exactly at a point in which we all might call close to being published. I ready the previous book in this series and I really liked it so I would like the next book to come out in a reasonable early time.-An interested reader
The year isn't over yet...so we will see.The writing business varies, but when you don't really get paid to do it, it's hard to call it a business. I have another job, and book has to take second to that. I wish that wasn't the case, but until someone gives me a big sum of cash and tells me not to worry about money anymore, it's going to be a slow process, so be patient :)
Dylan's heart is not to kill, but is to fight for what he wants; Trinity. It, the title, should be based upon the mindset of the (main) characters.
Hey Scott, I'm writing a book myself, have you got any tips for me? You are the most awesome writer by the way, I <3 you!
Read. And when you get tired of that, read some more! Read books like liquid! And write of course. Don't worry if you are good enough...chances are you aren't--but if you keep writing, then you will be. The only way to write better is to write more. Good luck! Send me a sample of your stuff sometime if you want another eye.
Thanks Scott! That is really good advice, I'll use my summer to learn physics and write!
Hey Scott! This is a link to one of my FanFictions, to give you an idea of my writing style.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8036820/1/To_Find_HerI have a couple of title ideas for N00b Warriors Book 2 aswell, so here goes!Hunting for HerTaking the ChanceWe Search in VainA New Life, A New LevelScore 1, Level 2
Scott, n00b warriors was one of the best books I have ever read. But the cliffhanger at the end is killing me! When is book two coming out? I hope it will be as awesome as the first one! :))
Anonymous,I am REALLY trying to have it done this year; I have a day job, so we'll see. I have a good feeling it will be though...Scott
As a writer just starting off, i want to say that i thoroughly enjoyed book one . Can't wait for book two
The Search for Trinity reminds me of "Star Trek: The search for spock"I think "Trinity" would be the best title.Cool book btw. Reminds me of Ender's Game a bit. Just finished book 1.
Too late...book two has a name: Rebellion
Hey Scott can we get a progress report or a publish date
Book 2 is on sale right now...Book 3 is in works...